Hurricane Florence Alerts Should Be Clearer
Hurricane Florence Advisory #44
National Hurricane Center
Advisory 44
Taken From (9/10/18) http://weather.gov/twitter
The “primary official Twitter account for the National Hurricane Center, focusing on the Atlantic basin.
When I unpack the language, focusing on the interested general public as the reader:
What I come up with:
The risk to life and property from Hurricane Florence is increasing. The risk comes from damaging hurricane force winds and prolonged (long lasting) rainfall inland.
- Storm surge at the coast
- Freshwater flooding
It is too soon to determine (know) the exact timing, location and strength of the hurricane. Everyone at the coast and inland South Carolina into the mid- Atlantic region should closely monitor (watch) Florence’s progress. Ensure they have their hurricane plan ready and follow any advice local officials give you.
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Any other ideas for a basic language template for these types of alerts?
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